School was busy today. Hectic. I wasn't able to scan the slice of one of my student's, so I took it to type it tonight.Me and my friend was playing in mud. (I was feeding my horse). I got stuck and I was trying to get my foot out. But I...fell. My jacket was muddy. My foots were muddy. And my sweat pants were muddy.
The reason I feel in love with this slice is that she used a great repeating line at the end...so fun!
2 comments:
I've been trying to teach fifth graders how to use repetition. Sounds so natural in this piece. What a writer you have!
The repeating line caught my attention as well. I also like the ellipse. It makes me feel like I might be falling.
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