Saturday, April 25, 2009

Poem

Eyes
by me

Slowing down
looking
truly

Quiet speaks
through the beauty

Taking eyes off myself
and onto

what's been

created.

3 comments:

SAS said...

I'd love to know what your eyes saw.

I like the way you used line breaks to create punctuation.

Ward said...

Very nice Cathy... I may have to have my Aunt take a look at your stuff..

http://www.poets.org/poet.php/prmPID/548

alotalot said...

It's true! We notice so much more when we just slow down.

I would almost move the middle part (about seeing what has been created...) to the end. I think that would tell us what your eyes saw (as suggested by Stacey)