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I'd love to know what your eyes saw.I like the way you used line breaks to create punctuation.
Very nice Cathy... I may have to have my Aunt take a look at your stuff..http://www.poets.org/poet.php/prmPID/548
It's true! We notice so much more when we just slow down.I would almost move the middle part (about seeing what has been created...) to the end. I think that would tell us what your eyes saw (as suggested by Stacey)
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